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posted 250 days ago
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I don't know how much time you have to waste on that Cloudflare article, but as it looks right now, I can't say I like that entire "Controversy" section.

That "CloudFlare is a vigilante extremist organization that takes the decentralized web and centralizes it under one corporate power" thing doesn't seem like it belongs in the middle of the article. That seems like something that should be merged into the top of it where it says "Cloudflare is an American company specializing". Perhaps Cloudflare is an American extremist organization specializing in taking the decentralized web and centralizing it" and some brief details on that?

Further, what's with the bullet-point list, it's hard to read and it looks silly. Ideally, all the top number point 1. whatever could be _headlines_ so they show up the "Contents" at the top of the page.

I don't know how much time you have to spend on it, or if you're an expert on the subject matter or not, but it seems to me that the huge section you added could be organized and perhaps written better. There's a lot of text between the one headline "Controversy" and "=Activism against CloudFlare and the defense tools" (no idea why is there even is single headline called "Controversy" when it's just a list of factual information about some reverse firewall company).

Anyway, thank you for contributing.